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红酒

5.5 分的口语需要的是大声跟读和背诵最常用的表达和句子，而不是自己造句。主要目的是提高基本交流的熟练度，而不是表达的深度。看看eslpod 那个讲解老师， 是如何用简单的词句，做英语解释的。 ...
lamjin 发表于 2012-12-10 11:40

                               
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俺就是5.5分的状态，
还是2年前的……

穆子

多谢各位指点，调整学习计划如下
1 英语口语8000句（每天2节） 口语5.5分和6.5分教程同时进行
2 写作5.5分教程和6分教程同时进行
3 ESL听力每天一课，江涛雅思听力每天两课

穆子

今天的5.5分口语第七课 FUTURE STUDY AND FUTURE PLANS
Describe a course or subject you would like to take in the future,you should say
what the course is
what is involved (cost ,length of time,what is taught .etc)
where you would study
and why it is that you want to take the course

I decide to take the Language Instruction for New Comers courses ,which is delicately designed for the new immigrants by the Canadian Government.The objective of this course is to help the new comers command English and adapt to the local lives.All the courses are for free ,however,only for the immigrants who have already got the Permernant Resident Card. The teachers would give many instructions in our daily life,such as  how to open a bank account ,or where to register your insurance,etc.In general,the LINC schools is easy to get to,especially in the big cities like Toranto or Vancouver.
According to my plan,I will immigrate to Canada in the coming year as an skilled worker.I would like to start a new life there.The LINC school would be my first step to settle down there.

Dawn

多谢金老师提醒，会在下面的复习中增加 自言自语 部分。
红姐姐，咱们革命路上手牵手哈。
12.4 上午看7分写作教程1-3（共8节),下午去银行取公司的单据并处理一些业务。晚上看6分写作教程俩小时。背诵一个例句：
The  ...
穆子 发表于 2012-12-4 21:52

                               
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很佩服大家学好英语的勇气，但我想这种学习方法真够折磨死人的。下面这句话不知出于哪位哲人，照这样的句子学习英语不搞死人才怪呢！
“The invention of airplane can promote the international communications with regard to economy,culture and education,which can contribute a lot to global development in the human history.”

1）"promote the international communications"应该为“promote international communication”。原因很简单，其一，communication在这个语境下应该是不可数名词，因此不用使用复数。另外，the的使用不当。大家如果Google一下“promote the international communications”，会发现这种说法大多出于非英语国家的报道中。
2）“with regard to economy,culture and education”不妥。尽管“with regard to”短语没错，但在此处使用欠妥，使用“in terms of”更为贴切。
3）“，which can contribute a lot to global development in the human history.” 从语篇分析意义来看，在此使用一个非限制性定语从句欠妥，其实隐含的应该表示的是一种结果。因此应该改为“and as a result contribute a lot to global development”。“in the human history”应该为“in human history”，人们更多地是使用后者。

仅供参考！希望同仁们在牵上手之后，要走英语学习的正路啊！

life007

Where is our dear naked teacher?
Is he invited to drink coffee by polices?

Naked teacher, if there are some mistakes in the above sentences, please indicate them, thanks.

穆子

多谢DAWN的分析，会继续调整学习计划。
007，你有用英文写回复的好习惯，赞！！！
下面我自己练习写作文了
Some people think that single sex schools are better for students than co-ed schools, to what extent do you agree with this opinion?

穆子

In the present age,more and more （an increasing number of )single sex schools are established to satisfy（support)  the educational need for teenagers.However,in the meantime,weather single sex schools are better than co-educational schools has sparked (sparkled) hot discussion.So far as I am concerned,single sex schools are advanced in many ways -than ( compared to) co-ed schools.

Provided with -dedicately (delicately) designed courses for the single sex students, the teenagers who attend the single sex schools not only have the opportunity to learn the basic classes,but also can get special trainings,like sewing clothes and fixing machines.In today's demanding and often fast-paced society,even the teenagers are facing a veriaty of challenges.Expanding tasks,condensed timelines and increasingly complex -regulations(rationale) must be managed.By saving time and escaping from(getting rid of) the distractions from the opposite sex,it is easier for children studying in single sex schools to( command the comprehensive knowledge and  figure out complicated rules.) figure out the comprehensive knowledge and complicated rules.
11.21 日修改

lamjin

Where is our dear naked teacher?
Is he invited to drink coffee by polices?

Naked teacher, if there are some mistakes in the above sentences, please indicate them, thanks.
life007 发表于 2012-12-11 08:57

                               
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这种不影响沟通的错误可以不用纠正。

穆子

Single-sex schools offer the parents peace in mind who have to send their children to a remote area to get international education.Far away from their parents' discipline and protection,boys and girls may not be mature enough to handle their feelings well.Admittedly ,a child's education has never been about learning information and basic skills only.As a miniature version of the society,the co-educational schools foster the social ablity better than the single sex schools.However,this demerit can be avoided if the children join in communities in their holidays.

In conclusion,attending single sex schools has many benefits in  children's personality and development.The teachers shoud make sure the peers in single sex schools have adequate communication to the outer environment.

Single-sex schools provide the parents with peace in mind who have to send their children to a remote area to get oversea education.Far away from their parents' discipline and protection,boys and girls may not be mature enough to handle their feelings well.It is not rare for the high school youngsters who are suffering from the emotional problems with the opposite sex to commit suicide. However,they may be sophisticated enough to deal with these things well after the gratuation from hige school. Many of my friends and relatives sent their boys or girls to a single-sex school for this reason .Admittedly ,.as a miniature version of the society,the co-educational schools cultivate the social ablity better than the single sex schools.However,this demerit can be counteracted if the children attending mixed schools join in communities in their holidays.Actually,many mixed schools are doing well in encouraging and motivating there students to take social activities .The students communicate with people from all walks of life in working as an volunteer.

In conclusion,attending single sex schools has more benefits than attending mixed schools ,not only in learning information and basic skills but also in emotional development . Both the students and their parents would take the advantage of this.
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Dawn

Where is our dear naked teacher?
Is he invited to drink coffee by polices?

Naked teacher, if there are some mistakes in the above sentences, please indicate them, thanks.
life007 发表于 2012-12-11 08:57

                               
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I know you must be trying to make things funny by using the sentences above.
1）“Where is our dear naked teacher?”这句话中的dear含义很深，但在真正的语境中你肯定不会这么说。
2）“Is he invited to drink coffee by polices?” 如果这样说应该更好“Has he been invited to drink coffee by police?” 另外，police为集合名词，没有复数，其复数应为“police officers”。当然，如果你用"policemen or policewomen"这种词在英语里面被称为sexist language.正是语体里应该慎用。
3）“Naked teacher, if there are some mistakes in the above sentences, please indicate them, thanks.”如果“Naked teacher”是一个人名，这么称呼是没有问题的。这句话应该为：“Naked Teacher, if there are any mistakes in the above sentences, please let me know. Thanks.”在条件状语从句中，some应该改为any.

供各位参考并指正！

红酒

穆子加油！

穆子

红酒姐姐好贴心。
睁开眼睛，发现是个温暖又阳光充足的冬日早晨，却很难放松，感觉像一只扛着巨石的小蚂蚁艰难的行走。。。
听英语口语八千句 5和6.  
看《十天雅思写作》中的范文，实话说，很晦涩，看不懂，更背不下来。
下面继续5.5分口语教程了。

穆子

5.5分口语教程 8，9，10的作业和练习
Describe a natural environment that you like (e.g. forest, lake, park, mountain).
　　You should say:
　　where it is
　　what you can see there
　　what people do there
and explain why you like this particular natural environment.
10课练习
Describe the public transport system in your city.               
You should say:
　　What kinds of transport there are
　　How efficient the different transport systems are
　　What kind of transport you use
　　And explain why you choose to use this form of transportation.
9课练习
Describe a favourite dish that your family cooks for a special day or festival.
　　You should say:
　　what the dish is called
　　which special day or festival it is cooked for
　　how it is cooked
and explain why it is a family favourite.

穆子

Tianshan Mountain is a gorgeous tour site located in Xinjiang Province ,the northest part of China territory. It is the clear air,crystal clean water and unique landscape that appeal the tourists to travel there.I visited the mountain in September ,where I was motivated to start a new life. The leaves of the trees begun to turn yellow in Autumn,therefore,the scenery was especially colorful and beautiful.Travlers from all over the world flocked to the interest and taken photos there.
I will never forget the night I spent in the small village near the Mountain.Escaping from the stiff competition in modern cities,the local residents are living peaceful and quiet lives.I got up early soon after the cock announced a new day.In the fresh morning,I decided to  slow down and quit my job.

穆子

I would like to talk about a simple appetizer in our family for the Spring Festival dinner,sour garlic. In the north part of china,it is a tradition for the family to reunion and enjoy dumplings for their dinner on the Spring Festival.The sour garlic is a special appetizer for the dumplings,because it makes the fatty diet on Festival tastes not that greasy.

The process to prepare for this appetize is as follows.First ,mix up the vinegar and suger in a bowl.Second,clean the garlic and marinate them in the mixture. Then,pour the garlic and marinade to a container and seal it.Make sure that the lid of the container is proper ,otherwise the dish will turn out to be mouldy.Be patient to wait for about two weeks .The garlic usually turn green and the taste is wonderful.My grandmother introduced this food for the children,and this appetizer has been a sigal for Spring Festival in our family.

穆子

口语八千句6和7 跟读两遍完成

穆子

What’s your favourite way of travelling in the city? Why?        
Notes: underground; convenient, efficient
A: I’m quite fond of taking underground in the city, since it’s convenient and efficient.

穆子

困意朦胧中听完了80天听力的49和50.
5.5分写作教程已经听完了，明天仍然是口语。周末复习巩固之。。

穆子

1 八十天听力 55 56
2 口语八千句 11 12
3 ESL 片段
4 读 十天雅思写作 的背诵段落，发现大部分内容根本看不懂，谈不上背诵。标记了能看懂的很少的几句话，准备放弃这个段落部分了。不过这本书里面的136词汇和36个词组，63个词组，288词汇已经背诵很多遍，基本熟悉，能运用一半了
5 读 雅思八分写作万能范文 ，基本都能读懂，但是不能融会贯通和运用，也放弃了

Dawn

困意朦胧中听完了80天听力的49和50.
5.5分写作教程已经听完了，明天仍然是口语。周末复习巩固之。。
穆子 发表于 2012-12-13 22:24

                               
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我的一个让睡眠加快的方法之一便是练习英语听力！真的很有效！