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发表于 2011-3-24 00:21:21
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I am reading IELTS materials now, in a windy and rainy morning at chengdu. So, what are you doing now, bird? In the sunny or cloudy afternoon in canada, is life as idle as in the secretary office in b ...
javeer 发表于 2011-3-23 09:55
pay my respect to an endeavored english-learner! as we all learn english as the second language, we could unavoidably make some mistakes even though we devoted all ourselves to it. given the failure of our education in mainland china, some problems are shared by both of us. my suggestions are as below:
1 a typical chinese-english tone must be conquered following a long-term consistant learning.
2 "in a windy and rainy morning at chengdu" should be better written as "on a windy and rainy morning in chengdu"
please don't hesitate to tell me if you find some error in my words. keep going! |
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