一切为了雅思---新概念三每日作文

civimagic

新概念三已经学到15课了，按照超循环大表的计划，应该开始写第一课的作文了，今后每天一篇。但自学无人指点，故特意将这些作文发到坛子上，请各位大牛批改。先行谢过。

黑色字体是课后作文给出的词组，紫色是自己增加的内容.


lesson 1 a puma at large

Mrs Stone had spent the whole morning picking blackberries at the edge of a forest. It was nearly lunchtime, so she decided to return home. She was just attpmpting to leave when she heard a noise in the forest. Then she saw an animal which seemd a cat staying up one of the trees. She knew it was not a cat beacause it was too large. The animal suddely jumped down and she thought it was going to attack her. She droped her basket and let a screame. Hearing the sound, the animal got such a fright that immediately ran away, after which, Mrs. Stone picked up her basket and ran all the way home. She told her neighbours that she must have spotted a puma but they did not believe her. She also telephoned the police but they did not take her seriously.

lesson 2 Thirteen equals one

At a small village in Italy, at one morning the church colck suddenly stopped while it was striking hours. It was very strange but no one could explain why.
The vicar climbed into the clock tower trying to find out what had happend. In his surprise, he easily found that the clock had been invaded by bees. Many instruments of the clock were full of honey and wax.
A bee keeper was called 2 hours latter. he removed the queen bee. For bee's natual, the other bees followed their queen flying away. In spite of this, a great deal of honey and wax must be removed. After the vicar washing whole day, the clock was cleaned and working again.

lekongwen

支持楼主！只是我水平有限，就不敢乱给建议了，留给其他tz帮忙修改，呵呵！

zhangwei9996

请问楼主你雅思需要多少分？
你打算什么时候考？
不担心会修改职业列表吗？

lekongwen

呵呵，我还在等hk的通知进入stage2才去考的呢。雅思，我要一个6.5就可以了，呵呵！

担心职业list修改？我是9/1政策的，一直再等呢，已经等了3年了。我也希望能修改，说不定可以让我桌上这顺风车呢，哈哈。