我的催鉴信--回suyang

Catherineshen

为了满足suyang的要求，我在这里把我的催鉴信贴出来，希望能给同样想写催鉴信的网友一点启示。但有一些声明：

1）里面所有的理由都是编的，没有一个是事实。所以写的时候，尽可能写你们自己的理由，不要照抄，如果是给同一个VO收到，他见多了，也就无所谓了，甚至会怀疑。就算要写同样的原因，也希望改一下写的口气和形式，这纯粹为你们考虑

2）本人的英语不好，里面如果有语法，词性等错误，欢迎请如实指出，也好让我再次学习学习。

Catherineshen

收件人 :  beijing-immigration@international.gc.ca
主题 :  inquire the process of immigration application




Dear Sir/Madam:

I started my application at the beginning of 2001 and got the file No. on 21. May, 2001.

The detailed information are as follows:

Name: XXXXXX
FN:XXXXXXXXX
Date of Birth: XXXXXXX

Till now my application lasts nearly for 4 years. During this period we lost lots of opportunity, such as promotion, overseas training, even recently I canceled the overseas ‘s traveling in the coming New Year festival.

My family took medical examination on 20.Oct,2004, and submitted all the supplement documents on 01,Nov,2004 to my agent. The status on the web site is still 12 now.

My son will get into his new semester after the winter holiday, and we could not make the final decision whether we shall pay the cost to his current school, as we’d rather to land in Canada and take school there if we get visa before the beginning of his new semester.

So could you please check my case at your early convenience, and give me a reply about when I can get my visa. That will help my family to get fully ready during the holiday and ever I can start to look for my job opportunity in Canada on web site ahead.

I have requested my agent to submit enquire to Beijing embassy one month ago, and have not got any reply yet. So I send this letter by myself this time. I hope can get your feedback before the New Year’s festive.

Your understanding and cooperation with quick feedback will be highly appreciated.

My contact mobile phone: XXXXXXXX

Best wishes
XXXXXXXX

677

谢谢楼上的，你几号发的？使馆几天后回信的？

suyang

很有帮助，但版权所有，不敢抄您的。

Catherineshen

我是2月3日发的，2月4日早上4：00左右回复的。（估计那个时间也是设置成其它地区的时间了）

茶里王

JJ佩服佩服！！！之所以能拿到的VISA也不是平凡的人！！

mfcguy

不错,如果再能精简点就更好了,太长了VO没耐心看,有耐心看完的浪费了审阅其他案子的时间.

kitty

谢谢

bly

希望管理员能把类似的贴子归成一类

Catherineshen

希望看了我的帖子，觉得可以有所启发的，别忘了给我加分啊！！！


方法可以参照置顶的帖子介绍。

拜托拜托了，行行好了。

belle

我也给你加声望了

小阿土

对,不要太长,如果一个人太忙,他没机会看完的.
短点的一个好处就是字体可以大一些,这样传真过去的效果会好一些.

Catherineshen

奇怪了，怎么你们加了，不见涨啊？？汗，大汗

一片冰心

谢谢，看过你的贴子以后，觉得你真了不起!真的。