英语菜鸟求 高手修改作文

elita

Your best friend Amy told you that her mumalways read her diary secretly and she felt very angry about it. She turned toyou for help. Write a letter to Amy to htlp her deal with her problem in atleast 60 words.
你的好友Amy告诉你她母亲总是偷偷看她的日记，她感到很气愤。请给她写一封信帮助她解决这个难题，字数不少于60个词

Dear Amy,
I know you are angry with your mother,because your mother always read your daily secretly. Here are some advices.
First, you can have a heart-to-heart talkwith your mother. Tell here you don’t want her to do this.
Second, you should always tell your motherwhat happened recently so that she won’t worry about you. The reason why sheread your daily secretly is that she loves you and worry about you.

Yours,

Penny

Dawn

Dear Amy,

Thanks for sharing your story with me.

I can well understand why you got so angry with your Mom. In fact, if I were in your shoes, I might respond to my Mom the same way as you did. It is fairly natural that we all feel uncomfortable when others read our diaries without our prior consent.

However, this unpleasant experience could be somewhat different if you perceive and handle the issue in a different fashion......

Love,

Dollars

Dawn

Dear Amy,

Thanks for sharing your story with me.

I can well understand why you got so angry with your Mom. In fact, if I were in your shoes, I might respond to my Mom the same way as you did. It is fairly natural that we all feel uncomfortable when others read our diaries without our prior consent. However, this unpleasant experience could be somewhat different if you perceive and handle the issue in a different fashion.

To begin with, all parents love their kids ......

Moreover. ......

Finally, ......

Love,

Dollars