Someone I love most

那时枫叶

小娜的演讲稿

It is said daughters are always closer to their fathers than to their mothers. But I’m not. My mom is the one I love most.
Mom was born in Hunan,but she is living and working in Suzhou now. She is 38 years old. However, she is always full of energy and not looks old at all. She is not very pretty, but she has really lovely eyes. They look at you like they can speak.

She is hard-working. She loves her job! She never feels bored, unhappy or tired when she works. She loves reading and writing too. She reads Chinese books or English books almost every day. Why I like reading so much? The most important reason is her.   

Mom and dad take care of me for almost 13 years. When I’m sick, she always looks after me for the whole night. When I’m happy, she shares my joy. When I’m sad, she often finds out a way to cheer me up.

I think my mom is the most beautiful person inthe world. Overall, I want to say:’ Mom. Thank you and I love you.’

红酒

小娜写得太好了！赞赞赞……

andywho

虽然中式英文， 却是爱之心声。

life007

暴露了楼主的真实年龄？

38岁，孩子已经上中学了，看来是早婚早育哈！

蔷薇

小娜真是个好孩子。

lamjin

发现一些小错误。

maolc

用词挺不错的，很熟。本地西人是这样写作文吗？我看的很符合自己的思路啊，若不看作者，也会觉得是老乡啊。小朋友在加国生活多久了？我可写不出这样措辞的小文来，本人号称学习英语已20年有余，惭愧。

玫瑰金

难道不应该是the one I love the most?

不过读起来很有爱啊～

FCH

很幸福呀。

lamjin

小娜的演讲稿

It is said daughters are always closer to their fathers than to their mothers. But I’m not. My mom is the one I love most.
Mom was born in Hunan,but she is living and working in Suzhou now. She is 38 years old. However, she is always full of energy and not looks old at all. She is not very pretty, but she has really lovely eyes. They look at you like they can speak.

She is hard-working. She loves her job! She never feels bored, unhappy or tired when she works. She loves reading and writing too. She reads Chinese books or English books almost every day. Why I like reading so much? The most important reason is her.   

Mom and dad take care of me for almost 13 years. When I’m sick, she always looks after me for the whole night. When I’m happy, she shares my joy. When I’m sad, she often finds out a way to cheer me up.

I think my mom is the most beautiful person inthe world. Overall, I want to say:’ Mom. Thank you and I love you.’
非娜 发表于 2012-11-30 14:42

                               
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不影响交流，不错。

无花果

小娜的演讲稿

It is said daughters are always closer to their fathers than to their mothers. But I’m not. My mom is the one I love most.
Mom was born in Hunan,but she is living and working in Suzhou  ...
非娜 发表于 2012-11-30 14:42

                               
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小娜太有才了，才中学生哪！


娜娜是位成功的母亲！

HOPE2010

娜娜幸福得流泪了吧。

William

小娜的演讲稿

She is。。。, but she has really lovely eyes. They look at you like they can speak.
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非娜 发表于 30-11-2012 14:42

                               
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墙裂要求娜娜配合一下做到有图有真相。

Carolline

墙裂要求娜娜配合一下做到有图有真相。
William 发表于 2012-12-2 11:08

                               
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同要求！！

嘿嘿，听过娜娜的声音，热情、甜美、非常好听，就是还没见过真人呢

longniao

Ruibin

人见人爱，这点也象妈妈。

那时枫叶

虽然有些小错误，虽然暴露了些敏感信息，但是这是她的原作，惹大家见笑了。。。

lamjin

看看错误怎么改。

wondering

虽然有些小错误，虽然暴露了些敏感信息，但是这是她的原作，惹大家见笑了。。。
非娜 发表于 2012-12-3 03:00

                               
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不笑不笑，小娜语法和措辞都不错，只是在构造句子的时候还能感觉出一些中文造句的习惯。这个将来多阅读英语文章自然就会改变。

话说现在国内英语教学明显提高水平了，最近接触了一些刚过来的小留，比我们那时候强多了。

现在被笑的其实是我们这一代，我儿子在家就常嘲笑我们

FCH

虽然有些小错误，虽然暴露了些敏感信息，但是这是她的原作，惹大家见笑了。。。
非娜 发表于 2012-12-3 06:00

                               
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除了写，还要演讲的吗？