未飘落的雪 发表于 2010-3-10 12:33:24

I wrote my first English poem .

I'm a Fish

Fish,a fish,I'm a fish
When I swim in a pool
Selfless and cheerful
Water massages me lightly
I rely on water deeply

未飘落的雪 发表于 2010-3-10 12:38:50

My second English poem.

Potato and Tomato

Tomato is sweet and red
Potato just is fade
Change potato to tomato
Is that possible?
Ha ha
Potato is still a patato

dancingpenguin 发表于 2010-3-10 19:26:55

My second English poem.

Potato and Tomato

Tomato is sweet and red
Potato just is fade
Change potato to tomato
Is that possible?
Ha ha
Potato is still a patato
未飘落的雪 发表于 2010-3-10 12:38 http://ourdream.ca/forums/static/image/common/back.gif

good job!

I am afraidit is more like a tongou twister 『洋葱头S89』

未飘落的雪 发表于 2010-4-28 02:11:02

I finished LINC 4.

dancingpenguin 发表于 2010-4-28 08:04:46

I finished LINC 4.
未飘落的雪 发表于 2010-4-28 02:11 http://www.ourdream.ca/bbs/static/image/common/back.gif

congratulation!!!!!!!

jiayi 发表于 2010-4-28 22:08:50

My second English poem.

Potato and Tomato

Tomato is sweet and red
Potato just is fade
Change potato to tomato
Is that possible?
Ha ha
Potato is still a patato
未飘落的雪 发表于 2010-3-10 12:38 http://www.ourdream.ca/forums/static/image/common/back.gif

Ha ha, cute.:-D
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